Hello beautiful people, above is my 3rd attempt of my elevator pitch for my product, JukeBaux. Based on the advice in past comments, I took careful measures to shorten my pitch, and focus on the general benefits of my device rather than all the technical specs. S/O Juan Soto for the valuable critique!
Editor's Note: Anthony would like to apologize for his horrific butchering of the word "effortless", it had been a long day for him and he would like to point out that "it happens" and "oops"
Im glad that you shortened it because it was still slightly longer then most people would like. Overall the idea seems to be interesting and easier then the alternatives out there now. http://entgarrett.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
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ReplyDeleteHi Anthony, you were very organized and so was your diction! I am glad you took in criticism from before and applied it usefully. I love your idea! I am a music fanatic as well and this strongly appeals to me. This is a great idea because this applies to different environments like small parties and professional events. Overall, your pitch was professional and effective in grabbing the audiences' attention. When you have the chance, check out my blog: http://kmglickman.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
ReplyDeleteHi Anthony I like how you are very confident when speaking about your product you know a lot about how you want to sell the product and you make it easy to see why others would also want to buy this product. Good job also adjusting to the feedback that you were given, something that I also did in my post. Check it out here http://markemiablogs.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
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